2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer and man with the development of technology , computer become a important part in our life and work. young people have to learn how to make your life convenience by useing computer.for example , you can make statistics efficiently by useing excel soft ware. when you want to know some information , you can search through internet ,at most time ,you can get the result that you want to get . with internet becoming popular, people offen do shopping on-line, as a evidence that the sales quantity of taobao web which is one of the shopping websites is over 20 billion perday. computer also bring some inconvenience to people's day live. more and more adults indulged in playing on-line game,and give up studing or working. because the computers go into people,s life ,the face to face communication is reduced as well as ourdoor time. in conclusion, computers have changed people's life.