一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

复杂句采用很棒；单词拼写做的很好，但文中词汇表达贫乏；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

November,16th,2013,Today is Saturday,I get up very early,A very nice day,I cooking some noodles and tomatoes,But I eat a little.A later,I am going to work,Sunlight is very good,I meet a partner in work road,I say"good morning"for her,I come in office,A day work has begun,A later,I am going to work.I,manager and boss enjoy the meeting.I am buy some foods in the supermaket at the afternoon.