题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
In modern society,with the high speed of the development of the science and technology, especially in the aspect of IT.COMPUTER has become one of the most important tools in our daily life.most of us may think that man can't be more intelligence than computer, and they computer may be more intelligence.so there comes out a discussion about which one is more intelligence. some people hold that the computer is more wisdom than man , computer can do so many complicate computing work in a few seconds ,but man can't do that.there are so many software it can operation and using it with computer, it can improve our life so much. some people believe that man has more wisdom than computer.computer can not work if man don't input the command to help it.the first computer is made by man, man can change the computer anytime if they want and all of the function of the computer is designed by man. in my opinion ,man is the most intelligence in the universe ,everything can be searched by man ,and man even can control everything in the world.