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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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In modern society,with the high speed of the development of the science and technology, especially in the aspect of IT.The computer has become one of the most essential tools in our daily life.Most of us may realize that the computer is very powerful and the man may be less intelligence than the computer,so there comes out a discussion about which one is more intelligence. Some people hold that the computer is more intelligence than the man.For example,the computer can do so much complicated computing in a few seconds,but man can't do that.There are so many software it can operate and combining it with the computer, it can improve our life so much. Some people believe that the man is more intelligence.The computer cannot work if man don't input the command to it.Even the first computer is made by man,and man can change the computer anytime if they want and all of the functions of the computer are designed by the man. In my opinion,the man is the most intelligence in the universe ,everything can be searched by the man,and the man even can manipulate everything in the world.

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