2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Many person want to succeed,but most of them fail.They do not understand why they can not achieve success.Actually,nothing succeeds whihout a strong will. When you plan to accomplish a great misson,you must face a lol of challenges.If you do not have a strong will, i trust you will fail.Some people who has a strong will can complete the great will. It is the same with us students.You would not become a winner,if you lack of hard working.As a student,we ought to have a strong will.Maybe,there are many problems we can not solve now,however,only if we insist on doing,we will succeed in the future.