2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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There are many elements for success,for example,diligence,smartness,patience and so on.But the most important element is the strong will.Nothing succeeds without it. Strong will is the guarantee for success.A person with strong will can achieve his dream although he experiences failure or sadness,because he always thinks that he can do it .Where is a will,there is a way.It's a pity for some people to flee half the way of success because of failure which they don't want to beat it.A man with a strong will never do it. People who have a strong will can accomplish giant mission.There are many successful people in history in and out of the country. As for us,it's the same.If we don't study hard,can we never be a useful person.When we can't resolve a simple problem,we just give up it.When we can't resolve some problems,we lose interested in studying.There are many university students waste their time playing computer games,watching movies or do other things without studying.The reason why they do it is that they don't have a strong will.In a word,we must have a dream and insist it,never give up,only in this way,our dreams will come true.