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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nowadays a topic of the advantages and disadvantages of internet has been brought into people's heated discussion.Diffrent people have diffrent ideas. Some people think the internet is good for men,because it can help people do their studies and work mere easily.What's more , people can get news from internet and can work better. But other people don't think so . they think the internet is bad for teenth . Teenth are easy to be intersted in the internet ,because tere are many computer games in internet .Some students love games ,and then they don't want to study .So internet can have a bad influence in teenth. Every coin has two sides .in my view ,internet have advantages and disadvantages . advantages are people can study from it,and we aslo can have business on it ,we can chat with friends on it.disadvantage are internet have many cheat news and lots of games.
