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Tom 邀请Wei Hong 参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Wei Hong的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说数学考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好给他写了封e-mail表示感谢。e-mail开头已写好。
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My parents are both on business now.And they will come back next month.I have to stay at home to wait for them to come back.My grandmother is stay in bed because she is ill.She must be looked after by someone.And there is none in my family but me.And there is going to be an important math exam in a few days.I must study hard for it.So,I am very sorry about that I can't follow your invitation to celebrate your birthday for you.HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
