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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2055
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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with spread of birth control, more and more families only have a baby. Children are becoming the apples in thier parents' eyes. Increasing requirements are raised for kids, sending to art class is one of selection in common. Morst of families in favor of this descion, they consider, apart from study, art skill also can help their kids stand out. Samiliarly, some parents object this idea. In their perception, studying in school is the only important thing, everything cann't disturb children even if studying art is benefited for kids in other aspects. In addition, parents dean the art not only do waste time, but also do wate money. From my point, I suppose kids need to learn art skill. to learn knowledge is enssital for every children, to attend art class also can enhance the ability that we cann't acquire in ordinary class. What's more, art can relief the extend in study and enrich school life.

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