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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Internet play an important role in this information age,but now there's a fierce debate about Internet,for it has the advantages when it has the disadvantages. On one hand,some people think Internet bring convenience to their life.When it comes to study,Internet provid learners with the lastest resources,they can get what they want with a click of mouse.What's more,workers finish work efficiently through the Internet. On the other hand,others think Internet make bad effect on teenagers.Nowadays,computer games are popular among the students,resulting in many of them are addicted to Internet,in a way that some of them make bad performance on study. In my points of view,everything has two sides,Internet is not a exception.If we can strike a balance between the study and play,we can benefit from the Internet instead of controlling by it.
