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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Internet plays an important role in this information age,but now there's a fierce debate about Internet,for it has the advantages when it has the disadvantages. On the one hand,some people think Internet bring convenience to their life.When it comes to study,Internet provide learners with the lastest resources,they can get what they want with a click of mouse.What's more,workers finish work efficiently through the Internet. On the other hand,others think Internet make bad effect on teenagers.Nowadays,computer games are popular among the students,results in many of them are addicted to Internet,in a way that some of them make bad performance on the study. In my points of view,everything has two sides,and Internet is not an exception.If we can strike a balance between the study and play,we can benefit from the Internet instead of controlling by it.

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