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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:998
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, with the society development, there is an increasing dishonest phenomenon in our daily life. The dishonest spread out every sides of our life. For example, if students do not want to go to school, they always say a untruth reason to their teachers. In companies, their employer often use some dishonest way in order to achieve their goals. Looking back our history, we can know that honest is basic of us. A large number of famous persons formed an ability of honest when they were young. People has pointed that honest is not only benefit to ourselves, but also is benefit to others. Therefore, it is very vital for us to do every thing. So we should form a good ability of honest.

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