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文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；注意文中出现的部分句子错误；全文结构较为严谨。
Now,because many graduated in the society,there are competed to them to find a job.So they are trying their best to obtain certificate,they think that the more,the better. More and more students are fond of obtaining certificates during their campus.In their opinion,if they have more certificate,which will secure them have more competition.They are using their time completely to obtain certificate,they even don't think about it,whether the certificate is useful for them or not.The only thing in their mind is to get more of them,then they can find a better job ,and they will be more competition in the society.Sometimes the certificates become a way to show off,you know,they will think that they have so many certificates,they can have the world. But in my opinion,I think maybe the certificates are important for us to find a job,but the first thing we should find out clearly,we are going to find a job that we like,not a job that conform to the certificate we get,and in our mind there must be realize that what we want in the future,so for the goal to get what certificate we need,not all of them.So many certificates will be a burden to us.At this point,it is not the more,the better.
