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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:998
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

From the mass media and also with our own eyes, we know much dishonest behavior existed in our society. For example, businessmen sell fake products to cheat their customers; students copy other one's homework or download illicit paper from Internet to cheat their teachers; and even worse, there are medical person produce fake medicine harming the patients. Seeing our society is filled with so man y dishonest phenomena, I can't help asking myself what's wrong with us ? When we were very young we were taught the importance of being honest. I am sure everyone must still remember that story “wolf is coming”. In the story the child kept cheating other people that wolf was coming, but when the wolf really came, nobody trusted his words and he finally suffered his own dishonesty. Also w e have heard many stories that people benefit from their virtues of honesty.

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