题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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With spread of birth control, more and more families only have a baby that the apples in their parents' eyes. Increasing requirements are raised for kids, sending to art class is one of selection in common. Most of the families are in favor of this decision, they consider art skill also can help their kids stand out except study. Similarly, some parents oppose this idea. In their perception, studying in school is the only important thing that everything can’t disturb children even if studying art is benefited for kids in other aspects. In addition, parents deem the art not only do waste time, but also do waste money. From my point, I suppose kids need to learn art skill. To learn knowledge is essential for every kid, to attend art class also can enhance the ability that we can’t acquire in ordinary class. What's more, art can relief the nervous in study and enrich school life.
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