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. NOV.16th, 2013 saturday fine Today, a wonderful time,i don't have to go to work ,so I lazy to get up until 10 in the morning.then I wash finished to food market, to prepare for my lunch,I bought a lot of vegetables,because tonight is a party,many of my colleagues will come to.After shopping,i ate a simple lunch began to sleep,when the afternoon 3 when get up,on the net for a while,and chat with old friends,soon, together with my colleagues,had a wonderful party. I'll clean up after eating.Until now I write it down,Because all the people were very happy today!