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Now,because many graduated in the society,there are competitive for them to find a job.So they try their best to obtain certificates,and they think the more certificates they obtain,the better future they will have. More and more students are fond of obtaining certificates during the period of their college life.In their opinions,if they have certificates,what will secure them have more competitive.They obtain certificates to utilize their daily time,but they rarely consider about if the certificates are useful to them.The only thing in their mind is to obtain more of them,then they can discover a better job,and they will be more competitive in the society.Sometimes the certificates become a way to show off,any way,they will think that they have so many certificates,they can have the world. But in my opinion,I think maybe the certificates are important for us to find a job,but the first thing we should find out clearly,we are going to find a job that we like,not a job that conform to the certificate we get,and in our mind there have to be realize that what we want in the future,so for the goal to obtain what certificate we need,not all of them.So many certificates will be a burden to us.At this point,it is not the more,the better.
