Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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At present, more and more people realize that a high education is important for a job hunter.The following is a research about education pays in 2011. We fond that the average unemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6% and the average median weekly earnings in 2011 is 797 . If you are carefully view you will find that the education is less than high school diploma those who have 14.1% is unemployment and weekly earning is 451 .9.4% high school diploma don't have a job and the median weekly earning is 638 . As for as this research we can come to a conclusion that with the education increase the employer will have a more high wage . in my eyes ,a high education is good for us