2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, online shopping has become a fashion. More and more people like shopping on the Internet instead of troditional shopping. Every coin has two points, as well as online shopping. On one hand, there are some advantages. Firstly, the goods of online shopping is cheaper than the stores. Secondly, it's convenient for people who have no time or unable to buy something. On the other hand, online shopping also has some problems. For example, customers can't touch the good untill they receive it. So we can't make sure the quanlity. From where I stand, we should be careful to online shopping. What we should do are that searching a believeable shop and chose the goods patiently. Only in those way, can we shopping online happily.