2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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At present, more and more people realize that a high education is important for a job hunter.The following research in education pays in 2011. We fond that the average unemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6% and the average median weekly earnings in 2011 is 797. If you are carefully view you will find that the education is less than high school diploma of whom have 14.1% is unemployment and weekly earning is 451 .9.4% high school diploma don't have a job and the median weekly earning is 638 . As far as this research we can come to a conclusion that with the higher education the more wage. in my eyes ,a high education is good for us to earn money.