过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句采用很棒;适当增加学术词汇的使用,拼写错误稍微有点多。
Hello everybody, Welcome to our club,as the proverb goes:A good club is a light to the soul.,you can be knowledge when you join in.Meanwhile,you are one member when standing here.Also,I desire to say a word again"Welcome to our club,thank you very much." Nowadays,in accordance with a recent survey that a great many people participate in plenty of clubs,in addition,they are long to make them power and smart.Your select is perfect that take part in our club.Furthermore,I will discuss the importance of joining our club in this essay,and hold my view on it. Firstly,please let me introuduce my club,my club always called"tennis club",perhaps mostly people have a common that it just a interesting club,Nonetheless,you will make friends and be knowledge here,so that you maybe become activity and outgoing,last but not least,you will be confidence and that is the first step to success.On the one hand,we offen to hold contests which each member can take part in,on the other hand,picnics are taken by us to bring deep firend. In summy,all it takes is the right attitude to face the problem that the joining purpose is studying and relaxing.