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2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:08浏览次数:1904
要求:
欢迎辞,欢迎加入俱乐部。
标题:Welcome to our club
本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞,属于一篇应用文写作,与04年6月的导游词类似,笔者认为难度不大,可按照以下提纲书写:   
1.表达你的欢迎;    
2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。
用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

用户练习作文:

Hello everybody, Welcome to our club,as the proverb goes:A good club is a light to the soul.,you can be knowledge when you take part in.Meanwhile,you are one member when standing here.Also,I desire to say a word again"Welcome to our club,thank you very much." Nowadays,in accordance with a recent survey that a great many people participate in plenty of clubs,in addition,they long to make them power and smart.Your selecting is perfect that take part in our club.Furthermore,I will discuss the importance of taking part in the club in this essay,and hold my view on it. Firstly,please let me introduce my club,my club always called"tennis club",perhaps mostly people have a common that it just an interesting,Nonetheless,you will make friends and be knowledge here,so that you maybe become activity and outgoing,last but not least,you will be confidence and that is the first step to success.On the one hand,we often to hold contests which each member can take part in,on the other hand,picnics are taken by us to bring deep firend. In sum-my,all it takes is the right attitude to face the problem that the main purpose is studying and relaxing.

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