题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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What is trust?There is a saying that trust is a bridge of communication.It is all realized that it is very essential to make friends with others.But a part of people who think we needn't keep trust in our lives don't trust others anytime. The person that is on maintaining trust always believe in them and others.It is useful to communication with others by the heart.And they are optimistic in life and