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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
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作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇积累较少;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

So great is people’s passion for making friends online, that they are becoming increasingly addicted to virtual world. Teenagers, particularly, spend hours of their leisure time chatting with their net friends. Reports said that millions of young people have made friends online. As far as I could see, making friends online is not a wise act. First of all, as you can see, it is quite unsafe to make friends online, for the simple reason that most people surf the internet with fake personal information. Teenagers like us are too young to distinguish what is true and what we can believe. Besides, there are many groups which cheat people for money or other things on the internet. And you will suffer a tremendous loss if you abandon yourself to making friends online without being cautious. Moreover, people have found that the students who chat online frequently tend to be less confident than average students. Instead of taking a stroll with family members or friends, cyber addict choose to meet net friends online for a chat. How pathetic it is! Last, craze for chatting on the internet does do harm to people’s health. A large number of teenagers are addicted to computer. Food is left uneaten, homework undone and sleep is lost. I can’t resist concluding this article with some kernels of advice: set a standard for friends online; arrange a reasonable time; spend more time with family and friends; read a wide range of books and you won’t regard internet as the only thing that can entertain yourself any longer.

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