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2003年9月英语六级作文真题:图书流动量

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:35浏览次数:815
要求:
图表作文,关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fiction, general nonfiction, science, art等),给出他们的流动比例对比,说明原因,并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。 
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。

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Novel mode of social interaction There is a very important part of social interaction which is known for its convenient: smart phones. Even though the smart phone has advantages and disadvantages, I am more willing to illustrate its advantages. First, variety modes of chatting tools like blog, QQ, MSN and so on help us to communicate. Whenever you are free, you can let your figures dance on the table and then send what you want to communicate with friends, families, even strangers. Second, we can learn the latest news from lots of webs or forums, whether it is true or not. Third, touching operation is more convenient and the icon on your phone’s table could be what kind you want. And the last but not least, its adequate storage volume could meet your desire to download abundant functions. Walking sitting, talking, eating with a smart phone has become a routine. That’s the situation that the smart phone has become the necessity in our daily life.

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