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Novel mode of social interaction There is a very important part of social interaction which is known for its convenient: smart phones. Even though the smart phone has advantages and disadvantages, I am more willing to illustrate its advantages. First, variety modes of chatting tools like blog, QQ, MSN and so on help us to communicate. Whenever you are free, you can let your figures dance on the table and then send what you want to communicate with friends, families, even strangers. Second, we can learn the latest news from lots of webs or forums, whether it is true or not. Third, touching operation is more convenient and the icon on your phone’s table could be what kind you want. And the last but not least, its adequate storage volume could meet your desire to download abundant functions. Walking sitting, talking, eating with a smart phone has become a routine. That’s the situation that the smart phone has become the necessity in our daily life.