2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

nowadays,people are not recieve the products,but the beautiful boxes.sometimes,we even get a big box,but actrually the gift is small.so i really want to complain about it that what can we recieve truthly? then,i get down to the sighs.why? maybe the reason one is that senders want to give a bright eyes to receivers,but he don`t consider that makes them dissapointed.the second reason maybe they want to have the face according to the big box.there are also other reasons i am not mentioned. in a word,i am neutral.something is aways have the two sides.this depends on the choices by oneself.