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There is no doubt that ,however, the tendency,which the impact of the internet communication are increasingly soaring, are absolutely irreversible.It is widely believed that the internet give a great impact on interpersonal communication.And a lot of attention are being drawn to how the internet pose a huge impact on the interpersonal communication? First and foremost, a great many people acclaim that the internet changes the way of our interpersonal communication.We had to talk our life with others by cellphone or face to face.But we could care and pay close attention to others via internet.On the contrary,tremendous people maintain that ,the internet is also a root of the problems that people are reluctant to talk more with others,with the growth of the internet.People's ideas vary on this issue. On my perspective, the advantages of the internet are far more weigh the disadvantages of the internet.For example,you could have access to interacting and putting forward your points about something easily.Therefore ,it is crucial and obvious that the internet make our interpersonal communication convenient and ample.
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