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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that ,however, the tendency,which the impact of the internet communication are increasingly soaring, are absolutely irreversible.It is widely believed that the internet give a great impact on interpersonal communication.And a lot of attention are being drawn to how the internet pose a huge impact on the interpersonal communication? First and foremost, a great many people acclaim that the internet changes the way of our interpersonal communication.We had to talk our life with others by cellphone or face to face.But we could care and pay close attention to others via internet.On the contrary,tremendous people maintain that ,the internet is also a root of the problems that people are reluctant to talk more with others,with the growth of the internet.People's ideas vary on this issue. On my perspective, the advantages of the internet are far more weigh the disadvantages of the internet.For example,you could have access to interacting and putting forward your points about something easily.Therefore ,it is crucial and obvious that the internet make our interpersonal communication convenient and ample.

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