2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(43)写作:回首三年的母校生活

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Today,I will tell you my school rules.Firstly,in my school,you shouldn't bring phones and computers to school.It's help us keep the games away and study better.Secondly,you should get up and go to bed on time.It's good for us to have a enough sleep.Lastly but not least,you cant't leave school until on the Friday.It's nacessary for us to become more independt. In my oppion,it's good for us to not to bring phones and computers.Howerer,we can't get the news wich is recent and important.So I suggest that we can read some newspaper everyday in the school. In a word,I love my school .Today,I am proud of my school,tomorrow ,my school will take pride in me.