2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

Recently more and more people buy in the internet, especially young people. it has become fashionable way. people like buying on the internet because it's convinient , cheaper and there are various products, we also can save time. But many persons really feel frustrated when buying on the internet. for example, there are many trap, you may buy the unquailified product, the product don't meet with the picture you saw on the internet, you should wait for a long time after you buy a product. the product may be broken and so on. how can we aviod these problem? in my opionion.1 our govement shoule play an important roles.2the shopping on the internet such as Taobao should improve their severce 3 we should be careful.