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某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。
文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，文中有句子错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Smile is all people can do and usually to do it.Why ？Because smile have some great reasons to make our to do . Firstly,when you meet a new friend you can give he a big smile,he will think you should a kindly friend and nice to met you.Secondly,when you or have a friend unhappy.smile can help you or friend outside the bad mood,bring some relaxing.Some people see they lover and parent will be smile,because lover and parent see they smile must be happy,and can reduce to worry about they. By the way, in my heat,i think smile is very impront and affect in my life.Because smile can give me some confidence to do something.and can give me happy to make friend ,so smile is a great way to live in the word.I like smile,are you？
