小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She is Tom.She has long black hair and two eyes are very beautiful.She is tall and fat but stein ago.She is working in a cement company.We are going to supermarket frequently.Sometime,We are go shopping to buy some blouse.She is so humor.We are get together so happy.She is like a sister to me.