2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,many goods were packed elaborately,which is just a waste of money and resource. What's worse,with the development of economic, the phenomenon is becoming more and more common. There are several reasons for this phenomenon.First, it is generally believed that one who has a good looking has good quality.However, the view is not actually true.Second, manufacturers packed goods excessively in order to make more profits.The more products was packed,the more the price is. Finally, as is known to most Chinese, a pretty appearance always shows respect when presenting gifts. In my opinion, excessive packing wastes our money and do harm to our environment. Consumers should not accept elaborate packing. And the government should make policy to prohibit this phenomenon getting more serious.