2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

On Excessive Packaging Many items are excessive packaging in today.We can see beautiful packaging everywhere. Beautiful packaging makes people believe the quality of the items is better.Beautiful packaging is attractive. People pay more for the packaging but not the item itself.Excessive packaging results resources wast no doubt.As our social face with a lack of resources,the quetion of wast seen more serious.It also is harmful to our environment too.