2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,many goods were packed elaborately,which is just a waste of money and resource. What's worse,with the development of economic, the phenomenon is becoming more and more common. There are several reasons for this phenomenon.First, it is generally believed that one who has a good looking has good quality.However, the view is not actually true.Second, manufacturers packed goods excessively in order to make more profits.The more products was packed,the higher the price is. Finally, as is known to most Chinese, a beautiful appearance always shows respect when presenting gifts. In my opinion, excessive packaging wastes our money and do harm to our environment. Consumers should not accept elaborate packaging. And the government should make policy to prohibit this phenomenon from getting more serious.