过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
In accordance with a recent survey the fact that a great many people favorite subject is watching the CCTV spring festival gala.On the one hand,plenty of people love it very much,in addition,the hold that is traditional festical.Nonetheless,others firmly believe that it should be over.I will discuss the importance of the spring festival gala in this essay,and hold my view on it. From my perspective,it is nessary that the spring festival gala because,it's all Chinese program which makes us laugh and teers.Also,our family will set together to watch the spring festival gala at present.Besides,we can know the wonderful Chinese cultrual and enjoy it. Last but not least,perhaps we don't like the spring festival gala which some problems are boring and insignificant,however,there is no denying that all people like get together with their families,enjoy it as well.