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In accordance with a recent survey the fact that a great many people favorite subject is watching the CCTV spring festival gala.On the one hand,plenty of people love it very much,in addition,the hold that is the traditional festival.Nonetheless,others firmly believe that it should be over.I will discuss the importance of the spring festival gala in this essay,and hold my view on it. From my perspective,it is necessary that the spring festival gala because,its Chinese customs which makes us laugh and tears.Also,our family will set together to watch CCTV's spring festival gala at present.Besides,we know traditional Chinese culture and enjoy it. Last but not least,perhaps we don't like the spring festival gala which some problems are boring and insignificant,however,there is no denying that all people like to get together with their families,enjoy it as well.