2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowdays , many parents do everything for there childrens ,like live,study,job and so on....But,how many people know this form are bad for there childrens.so How should parents help children to be independent? For the indepndent of chiledrens,parents should help childrens do his things by himself,and govenment shoud help people do