作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The ignorance of Chinese learning has been prevailing among the students.Some refuse to take Chinese lesson,some read few Chinese classics.In contrast,they are busy learning foreign language,such as German,English and so on. There are three premier factors that account for such phenomenon.First and foremost,the globalization stimulates the students' craze of learning English,which cuts down the students' time and energy.Moreover,fewer and fewer universities motivate their students to take Chinese lesson.Last but not least,the emphasis on "pratical subjects"on foreign language as closely related to hunt jobs. From my persepct,many measures should be called for to solve the problem.It should be clear to the whole society that Chinese is the independenal part and race.Universities should attach more importance to the Chinese teaching.Students should enhance the awareness of Chinese learning.