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nowadays，China is developing extrem fast in the world ,which brings people plenty of benefits along with some problems , such as the lack of plants and animal species.how to deal with these problems never fails to capture peoples attention. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem while others hold the opposite thought.in my opinion,the reason why the amount of plants and animal species decline is the human activities.human activities have bad impacts on our environment.in order to improve the situation,firstly,goverment should have laws to protect plants ang animals from being hurt.secondly,people should improve thier quality,under no circumstances should we do our best to protect plants and annimals .
