2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式变化多样；学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错。

In accordance with a recent survey the fact that a great deal of campus,which is becoming new tourist attractions,additionally,plenty of visitors select to become famous campus where have picnics as well as dating with their lover. Nowadays,there is no denying that a large number of strangers emerge our campus,perhaps they bring pets,kids,snakes,to name but a few.Besides,maybe they will littering or spitting everything,also,the visitors will make our campus where are filled with laughing.Moreover,I will discuss the disadvantage and advantage of allowing to viewing in this essay,and hold my view on it. On the one hand,some people hold that they maybe littering or spitting everywhere,it is difficult to clean,furthermore,the most essential question is 'safety'.On the other hand,to some extent,while others believe it makes campus where are filled with happiness,in addition,our campus will have a new face. Last but not least,from my perspective,the campuses allow to being tourist attractions,however,firstly,we should guarantee the safety of campus,secondly, the visitors should abide by rules. But now, we still have a long way to go.