2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,shopping online becomes a fashion.Many people buy things without wandering at the mall but online. There are many advantages about shopping online.Firstly,shopping at the mall cost a lot of time,and we always don't like wander alone,nevertheless we always can't find a good partner.So we can save time by shopping online,so that we can do other useful things.Secondly,after shopping at the mall we always be exhausted,so we can save energy by shopping online. Although shopping online has many advantages,there are a lot of shortcomings.Firstly,there will be sometime before we receive the things we buy,it always makes us worried.Secondly,the things finally received by us are always different from what we look on the computers.They are maybe different colors,different sides or other things,and they will make us unhappy. In my opinion,shopping online can save time,energy and money.It's a good way for our students to shop online.When we work and earn money by ourselves,we can buy expensive clothes and other things of good quality.