托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

Snap judgments can not be truested at all in my life, especially acdemic filed should be avoeded totally. what reasons could interpret this snap judgments could not be trusted ? there are at least three reasones to not be trusted at all. The first reason is that snap judgement have not been tested in real life just by geting this conculsion though a harsh action. For example, one theory without having a long time to rethink with aspects will often give human much more heavely dissastress. In real history of medice development, some drugs , smone not succdy drugs ,could tell me. The second reason could tell me that snap jugment is wrong action.