文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
There are so many universities in the world,but not all of them are so popular to us.We only know the famous universities,but the lest of them who know,totally don't hear of or know them.There seems to be made it sense rank the universities. Because the quantity of the universities,ranking the universities is popular to us,many people think this is a good way to them,by this way,they can know the famous universities,and make up their mind to study hard for their loved university.Not just to the students,but to the students parents,because of all them want themselves or their children to get in a famous university.And by this way,the universities can benefit from it,because the rank,they can attract many students. Any way,in my opinion,I think this rank things are so stupid,we go to college to learn,not for the rank,and college is a place for us to study,not a place that high on the rank.All of us should understand one thing,the rank is just a transparent thing,not so important to us.
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