2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

On Excessive Packaging Nowadays,it's pretty easy to discover the phenomenon that too many stuffs are over-packaging. When it comes to its reasons,maybe the shop-keepers are the first to blame because with excessive packaging,their wares can definitely be sold more so they can earn more money.What's more,we consumers should assume the responsibility of excessive packaging for the reason that we hold the belief that we won't lose face if we send an over-packaging goods as presents. In my opinions,there is no doubt that excessive packaging is a serious waste of resource.As a consequence,I totally disapprove such behaviours.Not only should the related administrative department take actions to perfect associated laws,but also we consumers should get rid of the bad habit of being afraid of losing face.Only with joint effort,can we build a more harmonious society.