文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;全文结构较为严谨。
With our country have more and more close relationship with the other country,we pay much attention to the English,because all of us think that when we study English very well we can go broad in future,so that's phenomenon :some student in shool are ignored to study Chinese.What's caused that? One of the reason is that English is more and more important for people,so as a student,who hear from his parent and teacher,we should pay attention to study of English,as Chinses is meaning of nothing to us.In fact,that's wrong performance to every student.Having a try,after 50 years,we can't speak Chinese any more,and our culture was lost,how can our country to strengthen itself?Depend on English? So,in my point of view,when we take our time to study English,at meantime,we should be to the study of Chinese.