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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Some students have done a interview about the living cost for a college student in our school recently. When asked about how much they cost during a month,different people have different answers.But the interesting thing is that every student being interviewed said they spend most of their money on food.For the students in our school,dinner party is very frequent and the cost of the meals usually tends to be more than expected.The interview also shows that the students cannot make the ends meet. So how to balance the budget?Here is some tips: 1.Write a budget plan to get real about your spending. 2.Reduce the number of dinner parties. 3.Study hard to win a scholarship. 4.Get a part-time job if time permits. 5.Save a little money in your bank account every month for a rainy day.

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