托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

有效的运用了一些复杂句；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬，可是文中有较多拼写错误。

There are debat on which one is better living in a rural area or living around a lot of people. if this situation make me choose , i could choose to living around a lot of people. Three reasons could explian why i choose this one withou thinking. The first reason is that if i could live communist with many home, i could make better communication with others and improve my skill of communication. by making all walks of life friends , i could get much more information from others. Then we could culture deeple friendship each other. My second reason i take choice of living a lot people is only there are a lot people ,there are a lot of common equpment to take advantage. this will give our life much more convinence, for example , Given i am going to find smoe data from libray ,i could directly go to libray and download some data, and aslo advise libriarian about how to find some other data resoure. having much more common resoure could be used in ordinory life. Thirdly, i am afrid of alone life in my heart. i offen take friends as a mirror self and offer good idea each other when whoever will encounter some bad things or sitting in bad situation, i believe making friends with others will give one lucky opportunities.this opportuny mabe is a good lisener when you are in suck sentmental, or this opportunity is better peers when you want to paly soccer or baskatball or volleyball. those scens will give you higher life qulity. From above mentiond i write three reasons , i will recommed to you choose to live a lot people is better choic and will offer much life experence of making friends wth others.