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As is vividly depicted in the picture above, Beckham, the handsome English soccer superstar, is enjoying striking popularity among the adolescents. In the first picture, Beckham's name appears on a young man's face. The caption indicates that worship for idol is written on the face. In the second picture, another young person is doing Beckham's chic hairstyle. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol's haircut. undoubtedly, the pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevailing among the teenagers nowadays.Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans.Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super girl Contest in china,which provoked nationwide noisy controversy on the value and harm of admiring idols. Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.