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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3530
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分57.5分
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文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过单词拼写方面要继续努力;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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There is no question of getting a degree not to considerate what you age. i must agree with a former that each one should learn till old enought. The spirits of learning will growing as aging. The first reason i will back the points of older should learn as the younger is that, as the development of technolendgy and social steps , each one could promise steadly that what he or she have learnd knowledge is not backward in a long time. So everyone should study whatever he or she is age. Moden knowlegdge is changing with the step of socail change. if someone do not follow the wave of moden , he or she will lose his target of life. conversiverly, if you keep your mind on new step of sociaty and technolegy and embrace the spirits of continuous learning ,you will have smart mind and improve significantly your adaptibility capacity. When you are old and old enough, but you have to communicate with youger throught email、text、new media、Ipad、MSN、QQ and so on. those now veihecial do not be used suddenly if you can not keep your mind to master using skill. So communication capacity of making friends with younger 、specially、with your son or offspring is resorece of your happiness of life. In the end of paragrahy, i will emphersize my view of aging should learn without thinking of . learning atitude is a spirits of encourging to chase new knowlege and keeping interest life. And older man or women could keep in touch with younger and build better relationship, get better happiness life.

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