2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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From the graph, we can see that the rate of family expense in the USA has increased during the year of 2002-2005. Food and Drink of 2005 showed an increasing trend. Which gone up from 18 to 22. Medical rose 2 percengtage too. Housing has undergone dramaticly increased from 25 to 32.Therefore, it’s obvious that expense in the USA was increasing. There are several reasons for the rising. First, the global financial crisis was sweepping. As a result, the pricees of food and drink became higher than 2000. Second, as USA is stepping into a aging society. So more medical is need for people. Finally, influced by developing countries those housing is always a problem. Housing was increasing quickly. From the above discussions, we have enough reason to believe what had happened in the next few years. The trend described in the graphic has been continuing for quite a long time till now. It's really a problem to decline.